Sunday, May 8, 2011

Annoited Bibliography

Annoited Bibliography
By: James Froelich

How Food Comanpanies Campaign Contributions Influence Republicans.   - My whole argument is about how Food Companies campaign contributions influence Republican's goals in a negative way.


Clawson, Dan, Nevstadtl, Alan, and Weller, Mark. "Dollars and Votes: How Business
            Campaign Contributions Subvert Democracy." Philadelphia: Temple Universary
            Press, 1998. Print.

"Agribusiness." Open Secrets: Center of Responsive Politics. 27 March, 2011. 2 May, 2011.
           

"Agribusiness: Top Contributions to Federal Candidates, Parties, and Outside Groups."
           Open Secrets: Center of Responsive Politics. 27 March, 2011. 2 May, 2011.


"Political Party Review." Open Secrets: Center of Responsive Politics. 27 March, 2011. 2 May,
           2011. <www.opensecrets.org/parties/index.php>



"Republicans Attack Public Health/Meat Inspections." Geat Health Connection. 18 February,
           2011. 26 April, 2011. <http://www.greathealthconnection.com/2011/republicans-attack-public-healthmeat-inspections/>

4 comments:

  1. Without your sources being annotated, it's tough to know how you plan on using them. Also it looks like 3 of your listed sources go back to the same site. You get different sets of raw data but I feel you might need more sources.

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  2. everything looks great, but i noticed you used the website opensecrets.org alot, and although it looks like a great website for your topic, and it seems that you are using diffrent articles within that website, i think it would be better if you expand your search to other websites aswell.

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  3. 1. Are the sources listed in this Annotated Bibliography reliable? Why or why not? the annotated bibliography sources are good, but you should try to find another sources because you only have 5. you should try to aim for 6.

    2. Do the sources listed seem relevant to the stated research topic? If so, how? the sources listed are relevant to the stated research topic. try to add how would these sources help you out.
    3. What additional sources might you suggest this student find? (Not specific articles/books per se, but what kind of information might the student still need to write this essay?)you covered every aspect of this topic, therefore there isn't any other information that you need to add.

    4. Are the sources listed in correct MLA style for a Works Cited page? (You can go to http://library.laguardia.edu/research/mla for reference.)you have the right mla style needed to write your essay

    5. Do you think this topic will make a compelling research essay? Why or why not? i think this topics will make a compelling research essay because its a great topic and you had good resources.

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